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Rock me so I can see nothing by ~WaterBug:iconWaterBug:



Rock me back and forth in this broken chair
Nurse me to health
close my eyes for me
kiss my brow
love my neck
Let me sleep while standing up,
eyes closed,
ears open,
brain active in fantasy.
Is this how most of humanity lives? Eyes closed,
unaware,
living in their own realties
It would be interesting to swap brains,
exchange belief,
live in other people's reality for a week,
see what they see without even seeing
©2004-2010 ~WaterBug
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This is something that I found in my journal

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"Oh why can't I be you?!?"

Think of how many people are having sex at this moment. Think of how many people are dying right now. Think of all the TVs in the world imploding at once.

To live in other people's reality for a week.. I think that's why people go on vacation. I don't really go on vacation though, because it is a privilege and a luxury that not everyone has access to. And I used to think that things worked basically the same everywhere you go. I'm not so sure anymore.
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I can't even think of some girl even enjoying my company like that. kissing her.. yeah its true everyone lives in their own world and it would be interesting to exchange minds but scary at the same time, seeing their dark corners to their true selves. Living a fantasy is what most people do and thats pretty much how you have to live now a days in order to be happy. but i gotta say i am happy but thats because i believe in things that will never happen. so thats almost like my fantasy world. wishing for peace, love and happiness. for people to stop arguing and start helping each other. but hey I'm getting off of subject. theres a good touch in this poem. keep on writing. =)
:iconwaterbug:
Thanks for the comment :D
It's good that your happy, a little hope for everything and everyone is always healthy(though you shouldn't stress yourself out if it doesn't happen) and is something that you can start bringing into your little world, create what you would want to be created and live it as much as you can......though, no one can live it all the time, no one can have everything be good and wonderful at every moment, but a high percentage of goodness is better then no percentage of it.
Thanks again for the comment :)
sorry it took so long to reply
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"Happiness is like peeing your pants.
Everyone can see it, but only you can feel it"
:iconwaterbug:
Thanks so much for the comment :D
It is crazy to think of all the things that are happening at this moment, it's hard to even attempt to think about..........
Thanks again for the comment ;)

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"Happiness is like peeing your pants.
Everyone can see it, but only you can feel it"
:iconrevoltone:
Love your stuff, keep on keeping on.......
:iconwaterbug:
Thanks :aww:
Keep on keeping on yourself ;)
:floating:

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"Happiness is like peeing your pants.
Everyone can see it, but only you can feel it"
:iconrachabelle:
Hey hey waterbuggy! I forgot to comment on this poem. I loved it too of course, like I love all of your quirky little pieces of life all bundled up in lovely writing form for us...

Intriuging poem. Yes I love to watch people and wonder what their lives are like. To wonder what they see and what they think and what they think about the world and the people in it.

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Make a little birdhouse in your soul...

Writing ~Rachting
Stock ~Mind-Matter
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a very nice poem....

though i didn't quite understood who's it for...

first i thought it's for the elderly, yet, i think it's for the misunderstood...

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Please click my angel >> :floating: << Please click my angel
:iconwaterbug:
Thank you so much for your cute comment :glomp:

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"Happiness is like peeing your pants.
Everyone can see it, but only you can feel it"

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